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A FINE, HILLBILLY DAY by efhjr.

A FINE, HILLBILLY DAY (c) Copyright 2007 by Earl F. Hubbard Jr.
(from ON THE ROAD, AGAIN - coming in a soon!)

The Tennessee Hillbillies,
Love to hug and kiss,
Just like Passion's Promise,
Little Legs and Endless Bliss.

Some like to trap and fish,
Some dream the day away,
Some shower in the forest,
On a warm and rainy day.

Jacob's like a bear,
He loves to hibernate,
Unless he's feeling frisky,
And has a naughty date.

Last night he took out Hilly,
And we haven't seen them since,
But it doesn't take a scientist,
To imagine where they went.

They were invited to a Hoedown,
just a half a mile away,
But they crawled into a cave,
for an extended stay.

Me? I'm with my Saffron,
Beside a waterfall,
Where we pitched a tent,
To answer nature's call.

Cara Lou's with Lily,
Practicing Green Sleeves,
Mr. Howard's with JoAnna,
Chasing banjo thieves.

Granny's chasing GrandPa,
THAT 'OLD COOT' CAN RUN!
Pyper and Michelle,
are frying in the sun.

Suzy caught a catfish,
BIGGER than her arm,
on a fine, HIllbilly Day,
filled with southern charm.

efhjr.

Author notes

This is the third piece for what will be my 24th book and the third book in my YELLOW BUS of PEACE & LOVE series of books of which I have 4 of planned - if all goes well. As with my LITTLE STAR books - my YELLOW BUS books are meant to be read from the first page to the last like the chapters of a novel.
ENJOY!
Peace & Love!
Earl.

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  • moonbumps silver member
    December 1, 2007
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    What a night!!!!!
    Jacob's a great kisser!!!!!

  • Pyper Rain
    November 30, 2007

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    LOL...no doubt I am frying Earl!! Turn me over! LOL.
    Seems as if everyone found a little something to do, some having a little more fun than others I see...laughs.

    ~B.


  • Lily otv
    November 30, 2007

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    Do we need to send out a search party for Jacob and Hilly, they've been gone such a long time! Perhaps Granny has given them a few tips lol, she's a game old bird with plenty if fighting and flirting spirit left in her yet. I hope Grandpa has some stamina lol.


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 30, 2007

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    OH my, will we catch this banjo thief...
    love it Earl and it sounds like me
    instead of dancing running after our banjo

    Joann

  • onesugar silver member
    November 29, 2007

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    Hiya dudee stop the kissing lol, I like my teeth. This made me laugh, very funny. Love Lilya xxx

    Hi matey absolutely wicked, this is so funny, everyone having a great time, brill. Stay cool matey. Love Dionte xxx

    Hi Earl, you make us laugh, we are having a blast, may it continue, the hillbillies definitely know how to have a good time. Looking forward to our next stop. Love mars bar xxxx

  • sunshinegirl
    November 28, 2007

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    Earl,

    Did you have to make me laugh? Got a headache, but oh well, this is great! I love it! And oh the fun we are having!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • onesugar silver member
    November 28, 2007
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    LOL! A fun filled day full of love. What a truly amazing time we are having spending time with the people we love. Just brilliant! This has a lovely feel to it.
    Love you ~sugar~ xxx


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 28, 2007

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    Dang it you beat me again!! He I like fishing. Hey he stole my banjo. Ye ha !! let's dance. Who's the Gramps hehe HEHE Love it Great job with this one Earl.

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