I don't care
that you say she's better than me.
(I already knew that.)
I don't care
that you say I am worthless to you.
(I wasn't worth anything to begin with.)
I don't care
that you say I am a failure.
(I know I'm not perfect.)
I don't care
that you say I am an unfeeling ice-cold bitch.
(Sometimes it's true.)
I don't care
that you think you know all about me.
(You only know what I want you to know.)
I don't care
that you think I am nothing.
(Maybe I am.)
I don't care
that you think I can be controlled.
(It just goes to show your naïveté.)
I don't care
that you think I am a tough-talking isolated loner.
(Sometimes it's true.)
I don't care
I don't care
I don't care
I can't
I won't
I don't
(ok, maybe I care...but I won't admit it.)
A contest entry
- PREWRITES!!!!!! by Luminescence.
450 points, ended March 5, 2008, 69 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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lol... funny ending... just shows how stubborn you are also... jkjk
Great poem. loved it all the way to the end. I can't believe how many great poems I'm getting in the contest. Good luck to you at winning one of the tropies because you in the pre-lims now....
Thank you for entering my contest...
~Lumin -
This is a great poem! I love the movement, and the achingly honest reflection of humans within it!
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I LOVE IT!!
this poem is so absolutely meaningful and well written. its do deep and its like you wrote all facts. i absolutely love this poem keep it up
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don't care
that you say I am an unfeeling ice-cold bitch.
(Sometimes it's true.)
I don't care
that you think I am a tough-talking isolated loner.
(Sometimes it's true.)
**I Love It**
Been there, thought that, and it royally sucks.
Great job*** That is, sincerely, your best poem on here.
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Very good
Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your heart and peak at your soul. When we give those feelings free reign we open ourselves to a world of pain. The simplest words "I am sorry" can be the hardest ever spoken and often times we accept the pain of regret rather than speak what we store in our hearts. Your love has been sidestepped in order to satisfy your pain...a sad and lonely lesson of life.
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