I look into your eyes and see your beauty.
I can't help but feel your curves,
you are amazing and I need to hold you, to touch you.
We disrobe and I lay you down softly on our bed.
I kiss your supple lips and you moan lightly.
I tenderly cup your breasts and play with your nipples.
Your body responds to me and I know you want me.
I reach down and your wetness shows me that you are ready for me.
My body is aching for you and you feel the same.
I want to tease you and I start to play.
I open you to expose your most pleasurable spot.
As my tongue plays my fingers dance.
Your body arches to me and I smile.
I reach up and start to kiss you again,
it is time for our unification.
I enter you and your moans get louder.
I go as deeper and deeper,
faster and faster,
The time is here and we both explode.
Loving you is my life.
A contest entry
- Weave Me Some Sensual Magic by StormGoddess.
390 points, ended December 6, 2007, 13 entries
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wow wow wow. Great job you got my mind going right where you wanted it. Just a small oversight,you wrote me fingers instead of my. Overall excellent.
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I love the feeling that pours from this piece. The only thing I don't care for (personally) is so many lines starting with "I". But each line holds a captivation for the next line.
Thank you for entering and good luck
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I was just thinking of trying to write a poem like this.... its great how we can express this with words.
Great Job! -
Awesome....and you told me you had writers block...
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This is a deeply sensual piece full of slow seduction describing a beautiful build up to the hyarmony of union with your lover. Very seductive... i'm kicking myself for being a man(((doh)))
This is a dee4ply passionate piece! I could feel your words melt upon my senses beautifully!
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sensual playground
wow..you and the erotic writes ..you really get my juices flowing..you wove some sensual magic..got me hot..excellent write sis..love ya..
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