Like the calm before the storm
Just walking holding hands
Magic in the words we speak
Of dreams and distant lands
The sweet scent of her perfume
Blowing softly across my mind
In step with each others heart
Life seems and endless time
Love can be a gentile touch
Words whispered softly spoke
Laughter that we only know
Our own funny, sad, silly joke
There is passion in this storm
That hides within my soul
For you this I promise love
My heart you will always know
So in the dream when I am awake
With you walking at my side
The storms passion rages there
For this storm I cannot hide
A contest entry
- Weave Me Some Sensual Magic by StormGoddess.
390 points, ended December 6, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Ohhh.. this was so lovely and passionate. Speaks of true love!! You continue to amaze me!
(I'm making it my mission to read you through... it may take a while, there's a lot lol... but I know it will be a wonderful journey)
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Very good!
lovely imagary; I especially like the line "...in the dream when I am awake" - and, of course, combining the power of storms, with the gentleness, was a good effect! I really felt the power of love in this poem!
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I'm such a sucker for anything metaphoic to a storm. This relays power in love and emotion. Well written and sensually soft.
Thank you for entering and good luck
Storm -
Oh my!
You continue to amaze me with the depth and the creativity within your heart and soul.
This is so deserving of a gold, as with everything I have read of your writing.
Much Love Sent To You From Me~
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Wow What a beautiful, flowing piece. Excellent Write
Cara
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BREATH TAKING
I found myself holding my breath as read each tender line...The flow held me close and your words melted my heart...This is beautiful and I thank you for sharing it with me
...O', can I have my breath back now?
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