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Ecstasy's Seas

I'll sing you a lullaby
Of tongue and lips

I'll write you a love song
Across your soft hips

I'll give you a prequel
To what joys wait for you

I'll make you the Temptest of the world
For you have tempted me

I'll make you Ruler of my heart
For You have conquered it already

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  • Janice M Pickett
    September 3, 2008
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    very romantic

    A lovely poem. Well done.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    December 3, 2007

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    "I'll sing you a lullabye of tongue and lips"... very nice opening.
    Without being long, this has it's sensual qualities. Nice work.
    Thank you for entering and good luck

    Storm