Standing above
all that is beautiful
looking up at the starry, clear sky
wishing for the moment never to end.
The moon
with it's luminescent cape
draping you in pure, white light
giving you gentle dreams.
The earth moves
under your feet
a divine being -
a dreamer.
Inspired by
the things that
pass us by, every day.
Making the world, a better place,
one thought at a time.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Contest by Denierim.
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Comments
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I adore the ending! Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful beyond words! To me, the ending is the most important thing of a poem and you did it wonderfull. I love the last line and how it's separated from the rest of the poem, all on it's own.
I also like this because it speaks to me in a way. I enjoy each day because of the little things around us and I feel sorry for the people who don't see all that.
"Inspired by
the things that
pass us by, every day."
Those few lines tell just that; how people should learn to see their life in all it's complexity. There's so much beauty in this world; one just has to keep their eyes open.
Beautiful work with this one! -
haha emma, a divine being huh? Mrs. Mueller would like this one. about the moon, you know. mabye. . . . oh never mind, you wouldn't read this to Mrs. Mueller for your life.
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Oh I love this!!!
I feel enchanted
and a little more educated--
great word selections,
and I just love the way you
ended this..
"Making the world, a better place,
one thought at a time."
Outstanding!!
~Pastel
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