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Feelings Collide Like the Tide to the Shore!

Your smile radiates warmth through me,
And I shiver no more.
You've saved me from drowning,
Pulled me safely back to shore.

I quiver from the feel of your lips on mine.
It's naught but pure bliss.
My knees tremble and weaken,
From simply just one kiss.

Your arms around me,
Keep me safe from harm.
I don't know how I went so long,
Resisting your irrepressible charm.

But I'm so glad to have you here,
In my life the way you are,
To think you were right there, all this time,
And I never noticed, it's so bizarre!

So darling, stay with me?
Don't ever leave my side!
I've never been happier,
Than the day I watched our feelings collide.

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About my man and I.

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  • sidewinder silver member
    December 8, 2007

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    romance touches thos memories found within that breath of time where a heart sighs.
    Here you have me smiling because reminded me of memories of my own. Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • hopelessly-broken
    December 1, 2007

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    wonderfully written!! i dont read much up lifting poetry, but this was a great peice..
    keep it up hun

    love always HB
    xoxoxoxo


  • Ali - Pie
    November 29, 2007
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    awesome poem! i enjoyed reading it!

  • juno0404
    November 28, 2007

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    "I've never been happier, than the day I watched our feelings collide." I loved that, great expression.