Put on file kept in denial,
all is lost in a heartless style,
what once was here has turned to fear,
how do you know what is right when left is up and loose is tight.
My war is solace dipped in hate,
given the motives to disintegrate,
we are as one when we crawl on the ground,
this army is hell's three headed hound,
to breathe in the dark you contaminate the light,
forced to rise together and fall in this fight,
still we are your children cutting in the night.
Chaos is unseen when you are not blind,
order is the evil chained in a line,
while your looking here they stand right there,
might they kill you if not then how,
we all love to hate when we love each other,
what is this lesson we seldom stand under,
not enemies just opposites chaos and order.
A contest entry
- Pimp up my honorable mention or trophyless by leander.
400 points, ended December 4, 2007, 92 entries
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Where do I start to describe how much I love this poem? The imagery is amazing and the word choice gives me chills down to the last line. "Amazing work" is all the words I can summon for how brilliant this poem is.
Keep writing with this much depth and you're sure to go far! 
A new poet on the AP block,
babydollxgonexwrong
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You have definately done a good job with adding some interesting images with your poetry - and I like that
the rhyme came here and there over as if it was forced though, but then again, that's just my personal opinion
Thank you for entering this contest, I wish you the best of luck!
Leander
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