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Captivation

Our eyes meet across the room
and I hold your gaze...
glancing down at your breasts,
you see the arousal in my eyes

a smile from me
across the room
sets your heartbeat
into overdrive

your pulse quickens
a small shudder
you try to hide

I catch your quick glance
at the muscles on my arm,
a thrill goes through me
because the hunt has begun

Standing up I come across the room,
apprehension and excitement
cross your beautiful face;
and I know it's only a matter of time
until we start to dance

So I do what any smart man
would do:
I slide my warm tongue
in your mouth,
pull your hair slightly;
right before I fuck your brains out.


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  • WillAlwaysLove silver member
    November 28, 2007

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    Awesome, I loved it. Great penn! The words would amazing, you certainly seduced me, you did the job. Thank you for entering the contest and good luck


    • MissFeisty
      November 28, 2007
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      Thank you! I really appreciate it! I had alot of fun with this one, writing from a guy's point of view. LOL