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a contraction of land.




city towers faded brick monuments
replacements squeezed into property lines
commuters scurry under  skeletal frame
of shiny new condos
cranes growl & arc

I crawl on gravel

in awe of  creation

but how they do spoil the waterfront.

fingers red, unable to grip, 

shrugged into  pockets
cupped to breath,
blown in hopes of
90 degree weather.

nothing

a contraction of land,

an erect skyline.



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