Picking holes,
She gets right up my nose.
Little digs,
I’m happy when she goes.
Finding faults,
To kick you when you’re low.
Nagging you,
Your brain just does not know.
Then she wants some loving,
Are you there?
Finding time,
She sucks the life from you.
Baiting you,
She’s happy when you’re blue.
Do you feel,
Its time for something new.
Its so sad,
To see a love untrue.
When you need supporting,
Is she there?
Days go by,
You need someone to hold.
Realise,
Your loved ones heart is cold.
They believe,
The lies that she has told.
Who is she,
To gloat as my life folds.
She wants to make you suffer,
Are you there?
Author notes
Lyrics to one of my songs...
In a list
A contest entry
- !GOSSIP! by ForeverLastingComa.
450 points, ended May 18, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - You annoy me love by prankstar.
1000 points, ended November 13, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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awww. so sad. But an amazing poem. Thank you for entering.
---prankstar -
OK, why aren't you published yet? this is awesome!
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Oh, it is lyrics..I didn't notice it until the ending where i saw the author notes. overall i thought this poem was ok..my favorite lines were,
"Picking holes,
She gets right up my nose.
Little digs,
I’m happy when she goes.
Finding faults,
To kick you when you’re low.
Nagging you,
Your brain just does not know.
Then she wants some loving,
Are you there?"
Thank You for entering and Good Luck
~*ForeverLastingComa aka Leesha*~ =D -
I know a few like that.
I know a few women like the ones in the song/poem. Better leave them to themselves or else the consequences are severe. -
Your words are interesting, captures people attention.
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I again have to agree with Pastel on this. it is the ability to touch peoples life
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I would love to hear the melodies...
Still reading....
*PEACE*
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This speaks volumes to me.
I know people like this
honestly..and isn't that what
makes a song...it's ability
to touch others ..to
sing their life...
I would love to hear
the music to this..
also I love -- "are you there"
"is she there"
it works perfectly!!
~Pastel
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Whoa.
That's about all my brain will allow to come out.
Stay safe
~AJ
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