Watch my eyes dance colors
as graceful moves greet your gaze.
Trace my scent in whispered winds
where dreams began in moonbeams
lighting your window.
Uncover my secret lying before you
my face, blushing passion
as feather touches brush pulsating petals
of this flower that flutters your name,
and all others are forgotten
from icy memory
as our lips meet in flicker
igniting intimacy to a flame-
this heart beating red against yours.
You melt my quiver
in tender tastes of nectar
to sweeten these thoughts of love.
♥♥
Author notes
your prompt is...
there is fire in ice...
taken from a Frost title
to bring your wilder sigh to sound...
A contest entry
- Fire in Ice...to feather the wildest grace by kaibab.
1100 points, ended November 30, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - but not just any kiss... by JinSays.
1532 points, ended September 21, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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as our lips meet in flicker
igniting intimacy to a flame-
How deliciously inspiring, it woud make a great prompt for a contest all it's own... and yes the rest of the poem is wonderfully warming as well.
Buddy
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lovely. moving through shades of passion that holds no reason-it just is, I love passion like that. the more, the better
...thank you lovely lady.
jin -
Perfect
A perfect sensual write
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Oh, my....
I don't think I've read very many things as sensuous as this. It's veiled perfectly, giving away just enough to have the reader begging for it to continue at the end. The only bad part is that is has an end.
Exquisite!!!
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"Uncover my secret lying before you
my face, blushing passion
as feather touches brush pulsating petals
of this flower that flutters your name,
and all others are forgotten
from icy memory"
Perfect
An absolutely gorgeous poem, good luck in the contest!
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" This heart beating red against yours"
What can I say? Simply wonderful.
Good luck in the contest. -
Excellent do i need to say more?
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So sigh is red, away from blue of forgotten ice...and if I had to read this twice...I would sigh in ourange and yellow too...remember you and such a poem...thanks so much for this wonderful entry
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I can feel you melt...as sweet the fragrance of a blossom unfurled...your essence lingers and nector glistens....sensual this is...
Mal
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