Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

the worlds weirdest christmas party

As I set out the food I wondered who would show.
After all, it was dark out, and it was starting to snow.

Frosty was first, for snow he doesen't mind in the least
and close behind him, were Beauty and the beast.

Than the dwarves trotted in, with Snow White and her hubby
a few seconds later Santa arrived, jolly and chubby.

Than Frodo and Legolas, that was a suprise!
Behind them came Skywalker, I could not believe my eyes!

"I invited some friends, I hope you don't mind,"
Said Shrek comming in, with Puss and Donkey following behind.

The weirdness didn't stop there, for Bugs bunny wandered in
Followed by scrooge, carrying Tiny Tim.

Than Charlie Brown, chatting happily with Linus and co.
Than Rudolph and Aladdin came in to get out of the snow.

Everyone ate food, and chatted like they had known each other forever
had I ever attended a more weird christmas party?  No, never!

We all sang carols, and opened holiday crackers
All the food was eaten, for my guests were big snackers.

As I bid them farewell, they assured they's be back for my new years party
I must have made a strange face, because the laugh they all shared was quite harty.

A contest entry

Please tell me what you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • February Moon gold member
    December 11, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Very well done. I enjoyed this. Made me smile and laugh. Thanks for entering, good luck.
    Chelsea


  • penman gold member
    November 29, 2007
    Edit | Reply

    Wonderful

    Very creative take on the christmas theme. Best of luck in the contest.


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    November 29, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    What a wonderful uplifting poem for Christms!!!! This is the best one of all i've read so far!!!!! I so love it

    MEGA APPLAUSE!

    GBY
    SilverButterfly


  • Darkrunn
    November 28, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    lol, great write! I really like al the different characters you used. Great job again and keep it up!