She walks down the hall,
A burden to the world,
They say that shes so ugly,
An emo girl with hair curled,
She went through the same stuff everyday,
they all just called her 'useless',
The preps, the jocks, the gays,
So one night she got fed up,
And took a bullet to her brain,
But before she did,
In her arm she carved,
"Useless is my name"
A contest entry
- what exactly have you won? by black lagoon x.
420 points, ended December 22, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Emotions. by lilblueeyesmine1978.
450 points, ended December 24, 2007, 44 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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It so sad that people have been driven to such extremes by the cruelty of others. Terrible as it is, it happens everyday. I don't get it! I loved this write. (Even though it reminded me of a lot of very sad things.) Anyway... I loved it! Awesome write!!!!
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So sad
I had a friend in high school that got picked on all the time simply because he was sweeter than the other guys. I knew he was gay though most of everyone else did not. I will never forget him calling me in the middle of the night one night and telling me that he had finally told his father that he was gay. The he told me to come and get him because his father said that he would nat have a faget living in his house. I will never forget that night because that is the night that he killed himself before I could get there. All because nobody would get close enough to him to learn to love him the way I did. Everyone judges without ever getting to know the truth about the person they are condemning. Thanks for sharing this and I am adding this to the finalists list.
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OMG
thats so sad. i cried. i can actually believe a father would do that, thats truely sick.
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Deep, thick, heavy
Your work is great as well as your social consciousness about all the kinds of people rejected and the excuses for it. Notice anyone we feel justified to hurt we call an "animal"?
good page
Tecohe
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AMAZING!
Thank you so much! i judge part of the contest,and on my part this is one of the best entrys!thank you for blinding me with such a creativly bold matter soaked in such fabulosity!
Thank you for entering,and good luck
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...thats crazy. I liked the last line...thats like twisted...but in a fucking creative way. -
Oh wow that is powerful I gees most people dont think of the effect of there words before they state them this illustrates that very well. Good job..
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This is sad.
I also like the last stanza. I sometimes feel like this...
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WOW, that last stanza is PERFECT. Much power from such a short piece...Great write :-)
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Oh that was so sad sounds like how I feel sometimes.
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BEST EVER!!!!!!!!!
omg omg omg this defanitley has to be one of the saddest shortest bestest poem i've ever read!!!, it was just unbelievably amazing!!!!!!....EVERYTHING!! about it was just so...WOOAAH!!!...i ecspecially loved the ending:
So one night she got fed up,
And took a bullet to her brain,
But before she did,
In her arm she carved,
"Useless is my name"
PRICE-FUKIN-LESS!!!!!!
GREAT GREAT AWESOME AWESOME WRITE!!!
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OMG. It's beautifully sad. It's like you were writting about me last year. 'In her arm she carved,
"Useless is my name"' I love it. It is AWSOME.
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That is really good and very true!
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WOW! really sad
amazing write tho!
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Sad write.
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Thats Awsome
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