Face aglow with sun kissed sea salt
tendered in renewed love
on a sandy beach in August.
The memory of such uplift,
forever captured in a single frame.
A contest entry
- Avatar by ea.
525 points, ended December 1, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Awesome write Pamela. Simply put with such a beautiful image produced. Thanks for sharing and congrats on the gold.
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ckwriter69
Thank you so much.
It was truly - a day to remember. ~Pamela 
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Photographs are magical and this portrays them as such. Giving us the chance to gain back a moment or two with just a glance. Blue
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Blue
Thank you. A day I will never forget. ~Pamela
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I think you have captured a beautiful image here.
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safiya
Thank you. ~Pam 
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understood radiance
cheery as continuous identification
the two verses make an experience out of the avatar, as if reader is handed it with writing on the back side asnd it can go in our wallet of knowledge a little bit
the guessing over your smile is not approachable to your your thousand times interesting evidence. Affirmation seems to be represented.
The touches with nature and invigoration of not just getting away but reconnecting everything with pretty priority reflecting well
I concur your summary magnifies much meaning to keep phasing with. Your short celebration lingers for me too, and you can have my comment points aside from the treasure.
a few to derive from,
also called
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also called
Thank you. You are kind with your words. ~Pamela
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Awesome poem that is so unique because it can take the reader back in their history and with endless possibilities "in a single frame"/poem. Good luck in the contest!
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maggiejamespoet
Thank you so much for your kind words. ~Pam
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a moment to treasure....
This vibrant image reminds me that a sandy beach has this quality of life that is self-sustaining. Each moment starts with a brand new day. That's what I found lingering within this single frame. Bravo, Pamela!! Don
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Don
Thank you my friend. I appreciate your kind words. ~Pamela
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It is such a beautiful picture you have captured and shared.
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Ken
Thank you. ~Pamela
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bravo
A moment snatched up out of the time stream for all eternity and left behind to tell its lone and lovely tale... loved it! bravo...bravo...bravo..
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Eusebius
Michael, thank you for your lovely comment. I appreciate it so much. ~Pamela
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You have painted such a beautiful picture wit this one my friend. I loved the flow an vivid imagery. From reading this writ, one could easily assume that you are warm and romantic. A peace be still, slumbering in hush of waves that caressthe soul. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes in the comp
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In Too Deep1
Jason, thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate them very much. ~Pamela
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This has such beautiful imagery and certainly would be a great day to remember. Well done with this.
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Kiran
Thank you so much my friend. ~Pamela
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swwweeet!
what a nice image you created with this piece! good stuff! good luck in the contest!
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Swangrnv
So pleased you enjoyed. Thank you. ~Pam
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mmmmmmm now there is some nice thoughts
and such beautiful memories indeed,
Great word choice of expressing this.
Love and Light
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Frozentearz
My friend, thank you for your lovely words. I appreciate them so much. ~Pamela
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A day to remember...
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