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[ Love turns to confusion ]

Love turns to confusion
Confusion turns to madness
Madness floats away
And all your left with is sadness

I love you so much
But do you love me too?
You'll hug and kiss me
But when it comes to something more, you haven't got a clue

I don't know if I can take it
Just watching from the crowd
Being still and quiet
While you are ear burstingly loud

I don't know what to do
Except sit and cry
I feel so stupid and pathetic
And I don't know why.

Did I do wrong, going for
The guy who was my friend
Going for the total dork
Who would break my heart in the end?

Did I do wrong, loving a guy
Who really wasn't there
The guy that was funny and sweet
The one he was when his mates weren't there

And now I don't know what to do
Because I can't break his heart
I have to end things soon
Before my world falls apart

Please dont use big words, i'm not as smart as i'd like to be.

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  • QueenOftheJunglegym
    November 30, 2007
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    do what?


  • musik-freek
    November 29, 2007

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    I know who you're talking about. seriously, if you do, it might make him be a bit quieter and nicer to you around school. but dont do it b4 2mo. very nicely written,though


  • Grimoire
    November 28, 2007
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    Mwaaaaaawww......... it's o.k. You are better without 'em then. You have written what many have felt before, and their world didn't fall completely apart. I like the last stanza, its kinda funny that you wanna break his heart, but can't. If you can't break it, then it was never worth having anyways.