her tiny heart beat normally.
she is beautiful, gorgeous.
and she's not mine to keep.
Author notes
Fifteen words. Prompt: Not mine.
A contest entry
- prompting you again... by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended November 29, 2007, 18 entries
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Comments
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This makes me think of somebody admiring somebody for their signifigant beauty.. how they are just out of reach... i see it.. i feel it..
Good Job.
-Emily- -
A delicate description of wanting... x
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WOW! This gave me chills...deeply written and touching. Very beautiful and strong in it's brevity.
Truly excellent.
Best to you!
mystic
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