When I look into your eyes
I see the love that we share
And I see the future I want to have
You sweet and caring voice
Just sweeps me off my feet
And melts my heart into a puddle of love
When I feel your touch upon my face
I feel your love spread through my body
This love we share together
Is a love that will never be shared
With another person
Because this love was meant
To be shared with you
A contest entry
- Show me Love by Fixing Tomorrow.
1000 points, ended December 18, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Have it in you? by Hectic Michelle.
600 points, ended December 9, 2007, 17 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Give me Everything you've Got by CrystalJet.
600 points, ended March 14, 2008, 318 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a sweet poem, and I like the message, it is just so sweet. I like listening to it, it's almost like a melody. Such a sweet sweet poem
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oh very beautiful and so full of love for this person...you are doing a wonderful job writing keep it up
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first of all. I adore the background. Being able to see such amazing love in someone is magical and beautiful, hold on to it.
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very sweet
Good job princess, so sweet and romantic. I hope your guy knows what a priceless treasure you are. I love you lots sweetie, Daddy
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wow
amazing i like it i can feel the emotion and the heart behind it. I have a poem simular to this its called hang-ups and heartbreaks but i doubt you'll notice the same things what I took out of it sorta is the same as mine. Anyways love the poem its original.
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touching
and warm, good stuff! congrats on the silver!
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I really liked this poem. I wish I had someone like that in my life!
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Very nice work here
I liked this poem very much
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wow! now thats what im talking about! i dont know why i didnt think of this before! what a great point and an amaizing poem! GOOD LUCK!
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i liked it alot its very well done and i can feel the meaning
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I like this. NICE background. & I like the way it ended. thanks for entering.
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This is so sweet and loving
and, just how it should be too
Juliex
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beautiful n loving hunni
love you sis
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