A darkened path
A weakened soul
Run
Hide
Scream
From apparitions
Lingering to haunt you again
A contest entry
- prompt; 16 entries, 16 words or less by Grey Mouser.
450 points, ended November 28, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You say so much in so few words. I look forward to see more of your work.
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For such a short piece there is a lot of passion and hopeless emotion within. It has a real air of helplessness and torture without escape. I really enjoyed reading it.
Thank you for commenting on my poem by the way
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brief yet so profound, it moves one towards those medical days before numbing agents and the defined torture you're describing. Well done!
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Images that strike terror in the mind, causing one to seek refuge as quickly as possible. Nicely done and thanks for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser -
You have done a fine job with this thank you for sharing this with me goodluck in the contest.Best wishes and much love
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Great job with this one my sis!
I love the imagery here.
All the best to you in this contest.
Keep it up and thanks a lot for
sharing it here!
Jeremy0826
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