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Make Her Wish Come True

I have an AP granddaughter
who'd like someone to love;
so if I could, I'd find that man
who'd make her wish come true.

He'd be a handsome fellow
with laughter and much joy;
he'd give her all she wanted
help make her life content.

I'd wrap him in bright paper
in a box on her front step;
when she opened up the door
she'd wonder what was there.

He'd jump right up and kiss her
say he'd been sent from a friend;
to make this Christmas special
as well as the next years too.

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  • celadia
    December 4, 2007
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    I love your idea of Santa Claus. I'd like a nice native guy, please. Good write.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 4, 2007
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    Very nice

    This would be such a sweet gift indeed

  • piccola silver member
    December 3, 2007

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    hmmmmm. I think a lot of ladies on the site might want one of these special gifts too. this is a nice thoughtful gift.


  • Lady Altheia gold member
    December 2, 2007
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    Cool can I have one too? Is there rush delivery?
    P.S I didn't know this was about me. Thank you Granny, I hope Santa hears my wish.