Inner feelings
real and true,
I just want
to be with you.
You went after another
it broke my heart,
lost the chance
didn't do my part.
I'm not alone
God is near,
faith in Jesus
he is here.
My fallen star
a heart so true,
I really miss you
in all that you do.
I go on living
without your smile,
how I regret it
after a while.
Said goodbye
without a clue,
when I really wanted
to be with you.
Author notes
Topic 3, Lost Love
A contest entry
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I like the first stanza.. small and honest. An emotional poem, thanks for entering.
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interesting, i like the rhyme,
good luck
Midnight -
Love it, great write. thanks for your entry and good luck.
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