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[ When you look up in the sky ]

When you look up in the sky
And wish upon a star
Do you wonder what the outcome
Might bring you from afar?

If you get your wish
Is it really what you want?
Was it just a bunch of words
That seemed everything they're not?

And what of the star?
Does it go up in flames
Or condense to your thoughts
Granting ease of pain?

Will someday all those lights
That make the evening bright

Author notes

I got stuck. ):
I'll finish it when I get around to it (:

none shall pass

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