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My Butterfly

I lay here with my blind fold on
My mind zoned out, lost and gone

Anticipation in the air
With the tension leaking everywhere

I can hear you breathing close
As you move down to my toes

Tickeling my feet lightly
I squirm around blindly

I twitch as I feel your skin on mine
Brushing up and down my spine

I can't hide my smile anymore
My laugh rings out across the floor

Your kiss is so gentle
And your tounge is incredible

I melt into the bed
While you whisper into my head

I can hear my heat beating
I can feel my mind shreaking

Your love is so strong
You are the only one

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  • lostangelz
    November 27, 2007

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    Beautifully written, such raw emotions in every line.
    Nice imagery-- very well done