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Dreamcatcher

Forget it, just let it go
A dream or a fire underneath your toes
has long been extinguished or muffled or closed
behind doors where nobody goes,
but even then a slight flicker still shows
of the impossible dream wanting to grow,
but never quite catching on to a flow
of intangible streams wanting to know
which way the ocean is or if hell froze
on the day you chose
to stop dreaming of where the wind blows
when it sweeps you, along with the crows
and back down to earth where you sow
your seeds
as dreams.

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Ever feel like you should just give up on trying?

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  • Einen-Idioten
    December 10, 2007
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    This is the perfect embodiment of my thoughts as of this month. Great job.


  • line shakes
    November 27, 2007

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    very nice, touching and sad. I too have dreams. everyday i go out with the same dreams and when i am back home the same dreams are being dashed again and again. i wanted to give up, but i just could not. i just hope in my dreams no matter how useless they may seem...its just so strange....anyway this is a nice write and i sincerely hope that whatever your dream may be, may it comes true.