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This Game Called Life

I don't like this game called life
You can never seem to win.
You only get ahead sometimes
And then fall back again.

So if a dice controls your life
And a board the path you choose,
We're all but plastic figurines
In a game of win or lose.

So what's the point of playing
If you can never win?
Cause how you play the game
Won't save you from your sin.

You have to play without the rules
It's the only option now,
So Chaos, Love, and Hope will burn
Along with all our vows.

So let us play this game of life
Though we hate it with every breath,
And see if we can make a mark
In completion, or in death.




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  • branislawa
    December 6, 2007
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    ...wow... I don't really know what to say other than that. It gave me shivers.


  • line shakes
    November 27, 2007

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    you dont like this game?? neither do i it is the most unfair game i ever played and playing still. i dunno whats the purpose of it, if it only means sin, temptations and suffering. Big price for a little joy. sometimes i dont want to live this life, i want to return it back, but its not a dress that i bought from the store for me to return. anyway.. i really like this one because it is simple and got its message right. regards.


  • absinthia
    November 27, 2007
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    yeap!i strongly agree with what you say!Cheerz!