Thank-you for every ounce of time spent with me-
Thank-you for everything you’ve taught me to see.
Thank-you for everything I should have known-
Thanks for the way you’ve helped me to grow.
I thank you for the time that we spent together
I thank you for the dreams and fantasy forever.
Thank-you for the honesty and of that truth-
There are times behind I’d have not got through.
Thank-you for showing me what selfish is,
Thank-you for sharing- but it’s none of my business!
Thank-you for trusting and believing in yourself-
Turning and leaving me left on that shelf.
Thank-you for spending all my hard earned cash-
Thanks for the friendship that now won’t last.
Thank-you for telling me that you’re glad we’re through.
It makes it so much easier to hate you!
Thank-you for the time that you finally won’t see me-
And where I stand now is clear to me.
Thank-you for making me realize
There’s nothing that special about your eyes.
And I’m sorry I ever let you in-
I’m sorry I decided to give in.
I’m sorry I chose to have you next to me,
I’m sorry that now is when you decide to drop me.
I’m sorry that things are so bad for you-
I’m sorry that there was nothing I could do
I’m sorry that it was because you wouldn’t let me.
And I’m sorry that without you I feel so empty.
I’m sorry that we had our favourite songs-
I’m sorry it turned out so horribly wrong.
I’m sorry I wasn’t a different person-
One that could make you better- I learnt that lesson!
I’m sorry things didn’t quite work out-
I’m sorry that I’m left without a doubt
That the one thing I regret in this life where I fall
Is the fact I met you, and I loved you at all.
Author notes
What I wrote to my best friend when I thought I'd lost her.
"that's what you get when you let your heart win" (And I agree wholeheartedly!)
In a list
A contest entry
- Hate by ApathysEnemy.
650 points, ended November 22, 2008, 35 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Promised Forever by Megan Awesome.
750 points, ended January 18, 43 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
If this was about you, would it make you cry?
Comments
1 - 10 of 10
-
Thank-you for telling me that you’re glad we’re through.
It makes it so much easier to hate you!
That the one thing I regret in this life where I fall
Is the fact I met you, and I loved you at all.
I loved these lines the most I think, even though all of it is good. I love the way it is written, saying thank you for all of the good and bad things, then sorry for letting him in.
learnt - i think you mean learned.
Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!
Megan -
it would make me cry but i know it aint about me
-
this was very well-written. I have one suggestion though, fix the spelling and grammer a little bit. Thank you isn't spelled with a hyphen. Other than that, I'm a big fan of the sarchasm here and I like the rhyming too. All you really need to do is tweak it a little bit
-
-
Without sounding rude- I mean the hyphen to be there- You can say Thank You, or you can say thanks. With the hyphen It's more of a thanks, but it doesn't fit.
What other errors can you see??? I'd love to know, purely cos English is usually my strong point, I'd go so far as to say I'm pedantic about it.
Not that I'm questioning you, you may have seen something that I have missed...
-
-
This is a very personal write very heartfelt and cutting, i really like it it would make a great song, its very gritty good write littlefishone
-
amazing
amazing write love it.
so much effort and emotion you have some great poetry skills. and i liked the way you made it rhyme has a good flow to it. keep writng speak soon. also it probably would make me cry if it was me but thats because I'm young..x
love ~.Natasha.~
-
-
Hey, how'd you find this poem?
You're a friend of my friend's. aren't you?
Glad you liked it. And Whether you're young or not- crying make you human!! I have one called 'Cry', poem wise..
And now I'll check out some of yours!
-
-
hm what can i say it is an amazing write I myself know just how you feel but it was with a loved one not just a friend
-
wow
wow that's amazing I would like to know which friend that was. the structure is great and it rhymes perfectly
-
yes
this is wonderfully written but sad that such a friendship that sounded so great at the start turned out so bad
Adding your comment:
1 - 10 of 10
