You touched me with your sensational fingers of white ice fire
In my quiver your arrow impaled me for eternity
Over and over I shuddered at your tongue
Your grip on my tenderness and hate
Blinding sense of letting you take all
Wrenching what I did not know I could get
Pulsating shocks to my marrow, through each and every orifice
To my heart and beyond to my shoulders, back, legs, arms
Paralysed by tripping touch dribbling between us
Knees raw, mnemonically scarred
Vulgar raucous laughter at a private understanding
I'd only dreamt of such ecstasy
It came unexpectedly
And went, only to come again
Before leaving me
Touchless but your fingers imprinted
On my senses
You, extant in my fantasies
White fire, paralytic desire
Ice burns, marred for the rest of time
A contest entry
- Dirty Erotica................. Come on people (18+ only) by Tatfreak.
330 points, ended December 3, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great write but not really what i was looking for in this contest really wasn't all that raunchy more sensual i think... still a great write
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VERY INTENSE AND EXPLOSIVE IMAGERY AND CONTENT TO THIS PIECE! A great piece of erotica dancing excuitement upon my senses
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