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Silver Platters And Silver Boxes

Him:  I would give the world;
                on a silver dish.
                      to grant her whim;
                              and her every wish.

Her:  Emotions locked in silver box
                  never to be touched
                        with  little gold locks
                            all this she clutched

Him:        Her wish, is my command
                            i am always there, no matter what she thinks
                                                i want her attention, i demand
                                                          i will be there for her when her world sinks

Her:  are you true to your word
            you tell no lies?
                i have misheard
                            the heart, it defies

Him: let me get the gold key
            melt the ice around your heart
              the love of your life could be me
                  let me give my heart, love i would impart

Her: .....its all down to me;;
              to give in and love.....
                          is that a chance im willing to take?

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  • absinthia
    November 27, 2007
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    questions and answers!my favourite style!i loved it!!


  • GiftedPsychosis gold member
    November 27, 2007

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    Very good.
    It was kind of hard to get the flow at the beginning, but it cleared up.
    Beautiful poem, it's so sweet.
    I love it!!