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THE TENNESSEE HILLBILLIES by efhjr.

THE TENNESSEE HILLBILLIES (c) Copyright 2007 by Earl F. Hubbard Jr.
(from ON THE ROAD, AGAIN coming in 2008 or sooner!)

Vince hugged Uncle Billy,
and Little Willy, too,
along with Aunt Matilda,
And her 'coon dog, Blue.

Jedidire and Jerimire,
Jacob, Jack, and James,
were playing TAG with Endless Bliss,
who couldn't spell their names.

GrandPa burned his britches,
too close to the flame,
while making moonshine whiskey,
and Granny was to blame -

for she had been playing,
an old, Hillbilly game,
a huggin and a kissin,
without remorse or shame.

Dillon was with Little Legs,
who didn't run away,
for he was her Romeo,
and that's all that I will say.

Lily played her banjo,
sitting on a swing.
"SHE'LL BE COMIN ROUND THE MOUNTAIN",
I heard the children sing.

Cara Lou was with her,
finger pickin her guitar,
Dionte had a grasshopper,
jitterbugging in a jar.

Possum stew and turnips,
grits and collard greens,
is what we had for supper,
along with hot, baked beans.

Our bellies full - we took a nap,
Bea baked a rhubarb pie,
that had her kin a singin,
in the good old, by and by.

efhjr.

Author notes

This is the second piece for what will be my 24th book and the third book in my YELLOW BUS of PEACE & LOVE series of books of which I have 4 of planned - if all goes well. As with my LITTLE STAR books - my YELLOW BUS books are meant to be read from the first page to the last like the chapters of a novel.
ENJOY!
Peace & Love!
Earl.

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  • Pyper Rain
    November 30, 2007

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    in the good ole by and by...oh did you bring a smile.

    Another great adventure Earl, where do you come up with it all...

    ~B.


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 30, 2007

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    this is just funny but
    you are doing a great job with these
    to make your riders happy
    and your readers too
    thank you dear Earl for a chance to be part
    of your magic bus poems with you

    Joann

  • onesugar silver member
    November 29, 2007
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    Hi dudee I don't mind a boy friend just not the kissing lol, don't let mum know anything. haha. This was very funny. Love Lilya xxx

  • Lily otv
    November 28, 2007

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    I'm not sure I could spell those names if i'd had as many drinks as Grandpa, and Granny is a game old bird isn't she? good on her lol If women have to be blamed for something it may as well be something fun. Even Littlelegs is learning!

    Apart from the banjo I can do a mean harmonica for a hill billy dance though I'm not overly enamoured to the menu at this party. Possom stew? What does possom taste like? The first time I tasted grits I wondered what the point was, the second time I was even less enthusiastic and after the third time I gave up. Rhubarb pie is not a favourite but turnips, greens and baked beans are ok. Bring back the chocolate cake


  • moonbumps silver member
    November 28, 2007
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    Feel full up reading this magical text...another great write magical man...x

  • Taking on the World
    November 28, 2007
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    This is another great addition to your collection. I love reading these little hillbilly poems.


  • onesugar silver member
    November 28, 2007
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    Hi matey, Oh what fun we are having, I love the song we will be coming round the mountain (my version not for mums ears) lol. Little legs has got a boyfriend, mate she won't be immpressed, we love it though. Hey grasshopper in a jar dancing brill Hahahaha. Stay cool, matey. Love Dionte xxx

    Hi Earl, Little legs isn't here. What fun people the Hillbillies are made me laugh when granpa burnt his britches, what a sight, this is so much fun, can't wait for the next one. Love mars bar xxxx

  • CherryOnTop
    November 27, 2007
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    This was a fun joyrney thank you.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 27, 2007

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    Possum stew ehhh yuck rhubarb pie emm yummy gittn drunk on that thar lightning HEHE Great Write. Woozy trip


  • sunshinegirl
    November 27, 2007

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    Earl,

    What a hoot! You did a great job on this one!! I love it!

    Something tells me that one of them pesky typo bunnies found their way to your keyboard,

    "who didn't run a away,"

    I think you got an extra "a" in there my friend.....hehe.


    and love my friend

    Nyetta


  • onesugar silver member
    November 27, 2007

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    LMAO!!! hey what's happening between Little legs and Dillon, you seem to know more than her mother LOL!!!
    What a blast, we are having so much fun here, with friends and family. Fantastic!
    Love you ~sugar~

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