Nothing matters,
Anymore,
Not the pain,
Not the last chance.
You're gone again,
And it's not fair.
People hurt,
And people lie,
I don't understand,
Why they just can't get along.
Act their age,
Be mature.
It's funny how,
In the end,
We were so much more than they ever could have been.
Author notes
Really just written off of inspiration from the cb..lovely inspiring people there
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475 points, ended March 20, 2008, 15 entries
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I can relate to this very much so and sorry you know how it feels, truly am.
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LOL about the cb, you have to love them mouths for sure on there, this is a pretty good write, It is a wonderful thought shared.
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Wow!
This may have short lines, but they are very loaded lines. Each line just speaks a truth that cuts right to the heart of the matter. I also love how this is wrapped up so well in the last line. I also agree with another comment on here that the last line can be a one line poem all on it's own. I would say that this poem has depth and maturity to it.
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Hey Kass. Nice read. This is true of many chat environments...Lack of maturity and such. But most people don't act maturely or whatever, so they don't have to bear themselves to everyone else. It's a bit different on here, as the poetry often shows more than people think, but still.
Anyways, nice read.
Mal.
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now u have caught the soul or essence of the poem there which to me is the greatest poetic achievement. i understand this poem well since i think im losing one of my closest friends at the minute. wonderful write. the last line is almost like a one line poem. xx brett
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Ha I love the way you got that out of the CB. I also see how you got it out..much drama...yea anyway nice
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