Falling down,
Isn't that hard,
It's getting back up,
That really hurts.
I don't quite know,
If you'll be okay,
Just want you to know,
I'm here for you,
Always and forever.
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Comments
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short and sweet. you really conveyed, in this short period of time, that you are a true friend. it took very little but you did so well. good luck and good write.
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this makes me think of my bestfriend/twin! aww!! *hug* great poem! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox
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Short but so very true, and so sweet of a way to show your dedication. I like this
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this poem is cute it says so much and speaks so truely about feelings and about love, keep writing, -Amy
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I can relate to this poem a lot. For quite a while I wasn't sure if I had any real friends. Then my senior year of high school I met my best friend. He has been with me through thick and thin, and I have no doubt that he will always be there for me, no matter what it is that I need. Great poem.
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Well said! Very true!
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This is a short poem that you've written, but it radiates a beautiful message to the one you've written this for.
Thanks for the entry!
Leander -
This is really simple and yet it carries so much heart and honesty within it that you cannot help but to be deeply touched reading this.
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A truly dear piece of love and support offered through your words to touch the heart and soul of another in need. Thank you for entering.
Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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I like the fact that it is to the point and brings emotions...that are really strong! Sweet and painful write!!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
pri
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you are like 20-25 words short for this contest you may want to try entering another write.
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short and yet full of emotion.
"It's getting back up,
That really hurts."
^^very true
excellent piece.
i look forward to reading more
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Love the way the poem starts off, and I like the fact that it is short and sweet!!!!
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This is a good way of explaining
that you'll always be here for
someone even if someone else or
you hurt them. But friends will
be there and you can learn to lean
on them. I enjoyed this poem.
GOOD LUCK!
-Emily
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It's great having people that care for you. You seem very supportive of those you love. Great job.
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That does remind me of a very good friend! Good for you for being there for all your friends .. what a nice little message. -
A strong person and a good friend!
I love these lines: "Falling down, Isn't that hard, It's getting back up, That really hurts." All too often, this is the very reason people don't try to get back up after "falling down". I love that the person being written about is striving to get back up and that this person's friend is right there for them through it all.
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Short and sweet and to the point, Such a small poem but such emotion.
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