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[ I saw her as she walked along ]

I saw her as she walked along
The lavender field bowing to her beauty
I viewed her, as she was
Bare and perfect
And I wept, knowing she would never be mine

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    December 10, 2007
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    This is deep and beautiful, light and intense. Thanks for the entry!


  • PureRomance
    November 27, 2007

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    This is a very deep and imagery-fille poem you have here. You did a marvelous job with this piece. Good luck to you in the contest. I hope you win. May God bless you in everything you do and write, and keep up the excellent work.