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aura...

 

her beauti deceptive

profound godess

walks the path of cleopatra

 

youth-driven soft-array

 

the loyal hearts that worship

follow her noble quest

as they kiss they bless

and throw rose petals at her feet

 

a dying child

A contest entry

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  • DeadlyPoetic88
    January 15
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    i did not expect the end. i personally am not a fan of it. this poem could end without the last line and i would be satisfied.

    i did like the imagery of the rest of the poem. beautiful lines and images. i do think some of the images could be tighter and concrete but what is beautiful is that this poem makes everyone see a different version of what they think is a goddess or what beauty is


  • Naridill gold member
    December 11, 2007

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    Beautiful imagery and a gripping tale. I like where you took this image, very creative, nicely done.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.