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If I could

I'd take back the depth of commercialism
Where ingratitude breeds
Where debts mountain up high
And parents hearts bleed

I'd give in return love and longevity
Peace and goodwill
And would bring back respect
And disciple instill

Show goodwill to all
Make opinions count through
It would help globall warming
With less packaging too

I'd give childless couples a chance
For too share
In homing a child
Whose home has no care

Then share poetry word
To reach those that I can't
By those here know how
And don't mind a chant

And the others here still
Who stand up tor a cause
Who through most of their strife
Get meagre applause

 

For those I've forgot

Merry Christmas to You

May the joys of the world

Come to bring New Year through!


Author notes

Christmas holds many emotions but there are many things my thoughts dwell on in wishing I could change. Thus said this is what Christmas means at a deeper level to me! Seasonal greetings to all!

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  • tiarna
    December 16, 2007
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    great write well done


  • jazman
    December 12, 2007
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    Jasman

    Sorry,but i missed the point. please explain


    • anaisnais
      December 13, 2007
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      The contest was askind what you would do if you could be Santa and have anything. I was saying I'd like to change the world to be a better place for all?


      • jazman
        December 21, 2007
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        From the Jazman

        beautiful art. Thanks for the insight

  • piccola silver member
    December 3, 2007
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    this is wonderful. Will Smith is wanting to do something great that will make the world better. He has money and connections...I'm waiting to see what he'll do. He frittered his first 5 mil away by the time he was 18...but now he's older. We'll see...


  • W a s p
    December 1, 2007

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    Just...

    another dream... but well worth thinking about! I have tried to write things like this but they never turn out right....ian.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    November 27, 2007

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    this is a beautiful write which i can close my eyes to, and image the whole scene. well done and best of luck


  • vici377
    November 27, 2007

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    what a beautful wish

    wow..sounds like a wonderful place to be..if only all that could come true..sign me up to live there..lol..what a wonderful christmas write..blessings to you dear sister..good luck in the ocntest...

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