remembering childlike youth
the petals fall to the ground
as our time passes
the ocean tide washing away our memory
as we are made to be young once more
A contest entry
- Picture Insipired, 10 Lines or Less/ 16 entries by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended November 27, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very nice and sweet take on the prompt...nice thing about age, you can forget the things you wish to and hold on to the others...lol kidding it is not selective which is truly heartbreaking.
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This is beautiful! Lovely imagery and take on the prompt. Best of luck to you!
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i like yours as well nicely done
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