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the desecrator

black beady eyes,
hunting out every desire.
deep venomous eyes,
hunting out your every flaw.

gazing in those eyes.
your fears materialise.
never did you think
someone could read you like  book.

a harsh shrieking cry,
gripping your veins, and pulling.
piercing bloodthirsty cry,
widening the crevices in your heart.

wincing at that cry
it shows you deep inside
that everything is wrong
yet you dont want to accept the truth.

black reptilian talons
gripping the wood like bony fingers
are gripping your chest.
rendering you helpless.

shivering as the cold claws
break your skin.
staining their black razors
with vibrant dripping red.

a hooked beak, coarse and cruel
inviting you to shred your wrists.
lightning fast retreat,
brings it slicing up your face.

dreaming at those dual blades,
cursing yourself for destructive attitude.
thinking of those you treasure
and all they would say.

once the bird has flown
leaving you alone,
you think to yourself
what wonders he has shown.

you now know what you feel,
deep deep inside.
and although it may kill you,
your true feelings. you hide.

a raven.

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  • Fritz O skennick silver member
    May 14, 2008

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    Wow!! Deep & dark...

    Great wordplay, metaphor, imagery, rhythm & flow...
    It all adds up to paint a dark picture in the mind of the reader that doesn't fail to invoke an emotional response...
    Well done!!!