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I Love You More Each Day

Soft serene the senses
And the look of you
Friendly to my eyes
A comfort built for two.
Beauty is in the eye
and love is in the heart
beholding is a gift
borne along from the start.
Travelling the road
bumps get not a second glance
two hands clasped in happiness
is our loving stance.

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  • jericadawn
    September 2
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    THIS IS SO A COOL POEM.. I LOVE IT

  • Rovingone gold member
    May 21

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    A comfort built for two. That's the way it should be. And, I like the part about the bumps on the journey not getting a second glance. Holding hands always warms my heart too. It's a lovely picture.


    • Star Shine gold member
      May 21
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      Thankyou for reading and for the many lovely comments and compliments you pay this piece. God Bless.

  • Drupadee
    March 13
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    Like the title alot ...and the entire lovely poem.


  • MariGoes gold member
    March 10

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    How lovely this poem is! feels like a gentle touch and wide smile
    So nice...

    Mari


    • Star Shine gold member
      March 12
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      Mari, thank you so much for reading and for the lovely comment. I am glad you got such a positive feeling from this personal piece.

  • RedStar88
    February 28
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    this is truely a great poem!


  • Ellis gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    Lovely

    This is so pure and true in the reading, I feel like it must be inspired by experience in a real relationship.
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    • Star Shine gold member
      December 20, 2007
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      Ellis, thank you for commenting, yes, this is very real and inspired by my loving boyfriend. Thanks for the compliments.

  • haikumonk gold member
    December 6, 2007
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    "Hands clasped in happiness" is the key.... especially these days. Nice, heartfelt write.


  • amilicious
    December 4, 2007
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    simply astounding

    i am guessing this is a mother daughter poem it seems to be and i love it


    • Star Shine gold member
      December 4, 2007
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      No, a love poem to my wonderful boyfriend and best friend with whom I live. Thanks for the compliment, thanks for reading.
  • Just4u
    November 28, 2007
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    simplistic comfort
    hearts melt together
    through love

    Hugs...Eddy


    • Star Shine gold member
      November 28, 2007
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      A beautiful image you have added. Love teaches happiness, time adds to love.

  • Mezclita
    November 27, 2007
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    ~simple... seems like the key to happiness~

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