Soft serene the senses
And the look of you
Friendly to my eyes
A comfort built for two.
Beauty is in the eye
and love is in the heart
beholding is a gift
borne along from the start.
Travelling the road
bumps get not a second glance
two hands clasped in happiness
is our loving stance.
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This is love!
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Two hands clasped in happiness
is our loving stance
love those lines
i always hold me fellas hand
brill poem Star Shine xxx
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june, thank you for reading, I agree, my husband and I hold hands all the time, every chance we get, it makes an awesome connection. Thanks for the compliments! Have a great day.
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THIS IS SO A COOL POEM.. I LOVE IT
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Thank you, I am glad you like it, every word is true about my wonderful husband and best friend.
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aw... thats good
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A comfort built for two. That's the way it should be. And, I like the part about the bumps on the journey not getting a second glance. Holding hands always warms my heart too. It's a lovely picture.
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Thankyou for reading and for the many lovely comments and compliments you pay this piece. God Bless.
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Like the title alot ...and the entire lovely poem.
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Thank you so much for reading and for the compliment!
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How lovely this poem is! feels like a gentle touch and wide smile
So nice...
Mari
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Mari, thank you so much for reading and for the lovely comment. I am glad you got such a positive feeling from this personal piece.
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this is truely a great poem!
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Red, thank you so much for reading and the kind comment!
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Lovely
This is so pure and true in the reading, I feel like it must be inspired by experience in a real relationship.
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Ellis, thank you for commenting, yes, this is very real and inspired by my loving boyfriend. Thanks for the compliments.
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"Hands clasped in happiness" is the key.... especially these days. Nice, heartfelt write.
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simply astounding
i am guessing this is a mother daughter poem it seems to be and i love it
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No, a love poem to my wonderful boyfriend and best friend with whom I live. Thanks for the compliment, thanks for reading.
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simplistic comfort
hearts melt together
through love
Hugs...Eddy
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A beautiful image you have added. Love teaches happiness, time adds to love.
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~simple... seems like the key to happiness~
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thank you for this lovely comment.
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