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Dear World

I hold up each one of you
Civilized or uncivilized
Nation by nation
Heart by heart

The sick and the needy
The rich and richer
Good souls and bad
No one forgotten

Now our Lord waits
To hear from you
You are in my prayers
It’s time for you to choose

C 2007 RainbowQueen/LindaRitnour
(All Rights Reserved)

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  • OnceUponAMind
    August 19, 2008

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    Nice write here, very spiritual and hopeful that God does not love anyone more than another... We are all the same in His eyes, and we are all welcome if we choose it!

    Amber

  • nuters
    May 26, 2008
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    It makes me feel so loved! If anything should be in those stupid chain emails, this should!


  • libithina
    May 25, 2008
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    Lovely imagery Linda for one and all to share with care s s


  • individuality gold member
    May 20, 2008

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    a lovely piece of poetry penned, full of spiritual smiles and caring for the people who dwell on earth. good luck in life and love.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    May 16, 2008
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    I love the equality

    in your write.

    pray and pray some more.

    lovely

    God bless...


  • abyssalchainsaw
    May 14, 2008
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    Very nice

    left me feeling how, if you felt when you wrote this, you are very lucky to feel.
    Great read


  • Upstairs
    April 3, 2008

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    What a great poem,
    it had a great rhythm from the beginning to the very end. The thoughts that you are expressing are just so..genuine. Great job, and thanks for sharing this lovely poem.


  • Touchof1der silver member
    April 3, 2008
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    One line blending perfectly with the next and the ending... was just as exquisitely penned. Great job here. Thank you for sharing this with me and best wishes in all of your endeavors. Keep that pen handy and ever ready for use dear poet.
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • Star Shine
    March 13, 2008
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    Very calm and supportive, a very positive read.

  • loveualways62
    March 12, 2008

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    Lovely poem, so nice to read. It is only right that everyone should be prayed for, after all we all need a helping hand from the power of prayer sometimes.


  • michichoeret
    February 20, 2008

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    wow

    such a generous person. did have problem with "the rich and richer". sort of superfluous. but love your play in the layout. very nifty!


  • Lyre-Bird-
    February 19, 2008

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    A great piece to read....
    you have captured the reader from start to end..
    I like the feeling of thoughts expressed here,
    well written

    thanks for sharing this piece
    Lyre-Bird-
    Tracey

    keep writing &
    keep your words flowing...


  • tarcus
    February 19, 2008
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    thanks for the prayer from a heathen in waiting.


  • aloveoncelost
    February 19, 2008
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    wow

    i love this poem it was a good read =D

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