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Insanity

Insanity consumes
First the mind,
Then the body.
Harmless at first
Vicious at end

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Its short, but I might add to it later.

Eclipsexoxo

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  • seasonsoflove
    November 27, 2007

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    short but great! i love it when people can write a small poem that is as meaningful as a really long poem... great job and bet of luck in this contest!
    ~rocklover91

  • stinkerbell
    November 27, 2007
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    good poem!
    talk 2 u l8er


  • xXxCaipirinhaxXx
    November 27, 2007
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    bookworm123

    it's good how it is. but if you want to add, do that. if it is good, always try to make it better.