Holly strung with silver tassels
joys of christmas mid the hassels.
Toss silver coins in kettles red,
the less fortunate can be fed.
Bethlehem one past December
a silver star to remember.
On the branches tinsel glisten,
to the silver bells we listen.
Dangling balls from silver hooks,
silver sprinkles in cookie nooks.
Angel high perched top the tree,
her silver wings so shiny.
Silver foil adorns the gifts,
sunlight shimmer upon snow drifts.
Candlesticks of silver on table,
garland hung beneath the gable.
Silver bows makes holidays bright,
reflection seen in christmas lights.
With silver mixed with red and green,
the joys of christmas can be seen.
In a list
A contest entry
- Holiday Blues...And Greens...And Golds... by Wolf Run0.
525 points, ended December 7, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great write. You are a very talented writer again and again I will say it.
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Hi, Thank you for reading my christmas poem. I hope you enjoyed it. You take care, Sandy
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wonderful wonderful wonderful lol did I say that three times, some great work here, This is just full of Christmas spirit
A delilght to read and I thank you for sharing it...
Love the bit about the red Kettles
A blessing to read,
Love and Light
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You have got it lady
The christmas spirit of silver, red and green.
Me- silence is golden and duck tape is silver.
This is what I will have silver abd purple
eggplant decorations and and duck tape garland can you picture this...mac i don't have egg plants- don't know as I like them??? well I thought it was funny.
PS I loved your Christmas poem the color and the sound were the best.
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Ooh, I like this one. Definitley the more serene side of the holiday. You play upon silver and make it even more prominent than red or green in this... I know 'tis what I asked for, but you make it seem like the msot important color of the season. VERY nice job.
One thing that bugged me...a few lines didn't share the same syllable count as the tempo I was getting in my head from the rest of the poem...maybe I'm reading it differently than you intended, I understand that that happens a lot.
thank you so much for entering, and best of luck in the competition/contest/thing-a-ma-bob-a-jig!
-Vivian
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beautiful Sandy
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Hello June, Always nice to hear from a friend. hank you for stopping by and reading my poem and leaving a nivce comment. It is most appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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i love the imagery in this poem. you did a fantastic job. keep up the great work.
love always and forever, Marissa Rae
~*~theXmadXhatter~*~
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Such a lovely christmas poem =)
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Hello Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem and leaving a nice comment. It is most appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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How lovely to describe all the bright things we adore, and the spirit of the season as well. Wonderful.
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You did a great and wonderful job!!! I really love this write!!! i love Christmas time and this was a really good poem for christmas!! Have a great day!!! you did a great day!
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this is such a pretty and beautifu write which really makes christmas seem so much more magical. well done and best of luck
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pretty...I love Christmas
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Hello Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem and leaving a nice comment. It is most appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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Beautiful
Just beautiful Looooove it! I can see it all through your words. Lovely imagery! It's grand. Good luck! Love you! God bless
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Silvery...
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Hello Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem and leaving a nivce comment. It is most appreciated. You take care, Sandy
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