I walked out through the smoke of dawn
revealing myself to the sun
one last time
I reared and screamed primally
I used the voices of children
to be heard around the world
wailing cries of torture
from small voices no one's heard
I used the voices of the innocent
and I soiled their little hearts
with truth.
Author notes
I am (4)Disgusted with the lack of truth in this world. We should all realize the power of darkness in truth.
A contest entry
- Options. (for lack of a better title) by Puking Faerie Dust.
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Aren't we those children?
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Thoughts & Opinions
At first, your write seemed a bit confusing as to what the message is trying to say. But now as I spotted your author note with that question, the message became more clearer. keep penning -
You need to put your option number in your author's notes, or else I will have to DQ you.
I will give a proper critique once you do so.
Thank you.
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