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Sleepless Nights

A silent ticker
flashing through darkness
Outlines of objects
once shown in full

Exhaustion never falters
weakening several limbs
once rejoicing in daylight
paralyzed underneath sheets

Forced to lie motionless
Eyes grow heavy
matching the weight of troubles
Darkness controls but does not win

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I couldn't sleep one night. I'm not terribly proud of it...but let's see what you think

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