I’m down on my knees
Throats choked, can’t swallow
The meaning has gone
My world has become hollow
I’m sat in a dark room
Locked in alone for eternity
No one to save me
No one to set me free
I’ve lost what mattered
My bright shiny hope
The colours have vanished
Under a dark dull cloak
I’m shivering now
The iciness of my heart
Waiting for something
To let me restart
A contest entry
- VERY best of dark by psychiatrists dream.
600 points, ended December 10, 2007, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lost and Lonely feeling Helpless by GypsyEyes.
550 points, ended November 30, 2007, 27 entries
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Comments
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"I’m down on my knees Throats choked, can’t swallow The meaning has gone" That kinda shook me and made me think of something else. Then I kept reading and I was like this wow this is really good. I felt the pain and lost hope of it. I enjoyed this! Thank you for entering and good luck! ~Dommi
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excelent poem, thanks for entering and good luck!
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