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Silver Flecks

Silver flecks drift
Upon the ground, angels
Stolen from heaven

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  • Swan song gold member
    December 5, 2007
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    This is a nice take on a winter hiaku also being so close to Christmase well done I like it


  • Abby In Chains. silver member
    November 27, 2007
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    and you said you couldnt wrtie haikus! beautiful. i hope you win1!!

    Abby