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Perky Nipples

The wonders of a sheer white blouse,
far from the safety of your house.
It’s time to trash that old brassiere
and go without, forget the fear.

This is what happens, dressed like this,
shoulders back, in feminine bliss.
People behold with much delight,
your perky nipples through the white.

Off to the grocery store you go
The freezer section; don’t ya know?
Where boys hang out to see the show,
of perky nipples as they grow.

Like little cherries poking through
Your lovely cleavage with a view.
You strut your stuff and bounce along
your perky nipples sing a song.

The boys will think that you’re the best.
With perky nipples on your chest.

 

 

 

 

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  • Maxboy gold member
    March 10

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    This is wonderful and very funny girl.

    Well Done....Best wishes in the contest


  • echo-ink
    March 9
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    YESSA!
    finals,
    thanks for entering yer nipples...lol lol lol


  • cricketjeff gold member
    January 29
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    Yep we do!


  • georgie
    November 18, 2008

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    ack reminds me of the time i lost my bikini top swimming down the beach an all my husband had to lend me was his white t shirt which was wet... we had to walk right past the pub to get home... u can imagine the comments i got lol,
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx


  • artis
    November 12, 2008

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    aint nothing like a set of perky jumpers bouncing up and down on two creamy mounds

    whilste running through a K-mart for a blue light special...I done missed all the good sales by standing there with my mouth open catching flies, and watching the parade of summer delights go bobbing by, I got nippled and dimed to death, but I was a richer man for it.... *from an Interview of standard male shoppers at any given moment in a store full of half naked housewives.
    1991....lol Great stuff...did you model for the pic.


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    June 19, 2008

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    god I miss all the good contests you have a great sense of humor and comic timing these have been a joy to read and perked me up no end.
    Cyber


  • HereComesTheSun
    June 18, 2008

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    i love how you added the freezer part and added the 'innocence of little boys' i have friends who do hang out in the freezer section for reasons like this great job and good luck


  • BluesMan gold member
    June 5, 2008
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    This is a very funny and very cleverly written poem about your attributes i loved it


  • paulcreates silver member
    June 4, 2008

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    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
    You got it gal! There's too much truth to this!
    I like:
    L1,L2,L3,L4,L5,L6,L7,L8,L9,L10,L11,L12,L13,L14,L15,L16,L17,L18 the best

    Paul

  • fanniesson
    February 15, 2008
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    im liked it
    but I'm a dirty old man.


  • Animarising
    February 15, 2008

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    LOL. This is a frrruity little piece. Dare i say it has a lovely bounce?

    I think I need a lie down...


  • alaskanamber
    February 15, 2008

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    I would call it spamtastic. Meaning I like it a whole lot more than spam. It hits pretty close to home to since my guy is obssessed with nipples. Great humor and content. Thanks for entering my contest.


  • WisdomWarrior
    February 15, 2008

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    This is like an R-Rated Dr Seuss. LOL. Interesting.

    John


  • Jim Berkheiser
    February 15, 2008
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    This is very, very funny and very, very clever. I love it. However, a response:

    Please consider this old hag
    whose boobs gave up and simply sag.
    To remove my bra would be in err,
    my nipples touch my pubic hair.

    Again, a terrific poem.

    Jim


  • C.I.M.A Punk
    January 4, 2008
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    Amazing write! It's funny and recognizable.
    Well done and good luck.


  • mackereth
    December 21, 2007
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    hahahahahahahahahahahaha! omg! incredible!

  • silverfish
    December 4, 2007

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    i don't have much to add. i just always make it a point(s) to take a peek when i see nipples, in titles, i mean.


  • Swan song gold member
    December 2, 2007

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    Yes we do Even us old fat guys! This was lovely and only you would think of putting this in sonnet form. Do you think Willian is rolling over in his grave laughing? I am lol


  • Tarja
    November 30, 2007

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    Very nicely done dear. I gotta say the rhyming in this was so awesome because you didn't go with the typical rhyming words and that is one thing that always turns me while reading poetry is creativity.
    This was very nice, I loved the last two lines, very true! Beautiful job love.


  • Pisces Pieces
    November 29, 2007

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    I saw this title when you first posted it and told myself I had to remember to come back and read it

    And of course it rocks! As I've already said, always so original and this is no exception. Fun, unique..and playfully tasteful (for lack of better description as my brain is not at full function at the moment)...

    Always awesome Amera!

    I better go do homework before I get too caught up in reading


    Michele




  • ellipsist
    November 29, 2007
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    delightful!


  • Desire gold member
    November 28, 2007

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    Oh My!!

    Now this is one Magnificent piece penned
    I wondered why there was a crowd by the freezer section
    Now I know

    Love this and Your rhyme!!
    also Your Author's Comment

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent Sweet Soul!
    Many blessings to You in the contest
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • sunny day
    November 28, 2007

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    LMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    You say I'm a nut! You have me ROFLMAO with this one. The picture wasn't even needed to see this scene. Your rhythm and rhyming both superb made this flow like the drool from those boys mouths at the supermarket in the frozen food aisle. This is absolutely the bestest and I know that's not a word. My poetic license. You just made my day complete with this one, it's titillating to say the least. I'm sure you can tell I got a kick out of this. Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift with all of us once again. Bravo!!! Bravo!!! Bravo!!! Best wishes in the contest, although I don't think you need them here. I smell a gold coming up. Love you my friend, Joyce


  • buttheadsloon
    November 28, 2007

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    Oh Amera! How sweet a vision you create of perkies peeping that conjure up a longing for admission to paradise! Lovely.


  • second-born
    November 28, 2007

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    oh yeah...this is so amusing...a very enjoyable read from the top 'til the end...boys do really like 'perky nipples...' hehehe...this is too 'darn funny!!!


  • Ithica silver member
    November 27, 2007

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    This is pretty humorous! I used to work in a bar and needless to say I had tons of volunteers when it came time to restock from the main cooler, especially in the summer when the clothing was much skimpier. The running joke was, "It must be dark back there, cuz you have your HIGHBEAMS on" I have to admit it was good for tips! hehehe Great poem...

  • xxSparrowxx
    November 27, 2007
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    the best sensual piece written since being on thids god for saken sight like this teach the others


  • Cup-a-Joe
    November 27, 2007
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    Perkfit

    Wonderful poem. I just adore nipples.lol
    Joe


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    November 27, 2007

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    Awesome! Needless to say, the title drew me in. Fantastic rhymes, rhythm, flow and imagery. Made me LOL...Shared this with a horny friend and it made him say woowww greatttttttttttt...

    All the best,
    Charishma


  • Never Fall in Love
    November 27, 2007
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    hahahahahahahaha


  • Hetha gold member
    November 27, 2007

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    I can just picture this in my mind, going to the freezer section of our local grocery store, and giving them a peep show, with a simple sheer blouse. Sadly, in my town, they might just call the authorities and have me arrested. I still loved it, and laughed at the delicious thoughts here. Great job! Good luck in the contest.


  • macandrew
    November 27, 2007

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    Beautifully written; smooth and flowing like the fabic and the fine curves.

    A delight.
    John


  • MysticalRayne
    November 27, 2007

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    I concur this piece is absolutly delightful and so full of truth. Being free and expressing oneself lol Excellent read!!!!!!!


  • Bedroom Eyes
    November 27, 2007

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    Speaking as a fan of perky nipples, I found this piece delightful

    I love your quirky, humorous side, and the way this poem rolls off the tongue. (pun DEFINITELY intended)

    Thanks for the smiles this morning Sweetie, and best of luck to you in the contest!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    November 27, 2007
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    It doesn't matter where you are
    With boobs like those you would go far
    Especially without a bra
    And lovely perky nipples

    I may be aging, going grey
    But any girl can make my day
    If I should see her dressed that way
    With lovely perky nipples

    So in this game I hope you win
    And wear a blouse that's oh so thin
    I wish I was in the room you're in
    To see those perky nipples!


    • Amera gold member
      November 27, 2007
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      hehe... thanks. This poem seems to be attracting the men on this site.

      Love,
      Amera♥


      • cricketjeff gold member
        November 27, 2007

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        A very pretty 26 year old elf writes about her perky nipples and men turn up. Who'd have thought it!
        My excuse is I was following up on your stunning triplet rhyme but I'm pretty sure I'd have noticed the title anyway!
        It goes nicely with two of mine

        http://allpoetry.com/poem/3395630

        http://allpoetry.com/poem/3420120

        Thanks for the original poem which I omitted in my first rhyming comment


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 27, 2007

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    well done my sweet.
    this was a mighty treat,

    good luck to you i really dont think you need it.

    Love ya
    Tory


  • PerVirtuous
    November 27, 2007

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    Stuff a potato in my shorts
    Make sure my hair’s not out of sorts
    Make sure I dress in proper ilk
    For watching women choose their milk

    Try not to make too wild a face
    When THAT one browses freezer case
    Oh, my the milf with long brown hair
    Is watching me from over there

    This pretty young one comes to me
    Complaining I oogle titty
    I say, “Maam, I will stop, you see
    once your nipples stop watching me.”



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