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A Tarnished Star.

Luciferous Silver
thirty pieces
melted into
a costly ornament hung.
Gleaming icicles drape it
in a stream of tears,
for Judas who
denied the Christ mass,
long after the shimmering star,
of the virgin birth,
led to his meteoric death.

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  • Wolf Run0
    November 27, 2007

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    The instant I read this, I fell in love. Not even kidding. I am a huge Bible freak, so this caught me right off the bat. I love it.
    "Luciferous Silver
    thirty pieces
    melted into
    a costly ornament hung"
    Abso-bally-lutely BRILLIANT writing! So descriptive...Just pulled me in from the start and kept me there. Amazing...*Leaves breathless*
    -Vivian