your look alike the fire
cover a desire in heat
extinguish a fantasy sweating
with closeness a body.
panting breath looks
to soak dew of a garden
to inhale subtle aromas
touching to pleasure a being.
to listen attempted waiting
sound of a voice to record
in your heart my sweet words
calling rapidly to a love.
mouth greets the figure
drives crazy to thought
returns such uncertain lips
imagining to touch,
rubbed a little skin.
Author notes
dedicated to my love 'Stela'
A contest entry
- The X Chromosome (700 POINTS) by Shahrazad.
700 points, ended December 6, 2007, 25 entries
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Comments
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I loved how this poem had a sort of rythem to it- like a heart beat or panting breath and it worked magic for this poem. I loved how you eluded to passion and a bit or erotism, and you did so beautifully. I felt like I was looking straight into your thought streams as you gaze at your love. I enjoyed this. Thanks for entering it in the contest!
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