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Fabricated Lives

Confusion setting in

 

        Like lies we tell ourselves

 

             Alabaster teardrops

 

                               Ebbing away our souls

 

                               Delirium is proven

 

                                    Dotage dictates media

 

With wicked fabrications

 

Meant to fool the world

 

 

 

  

The tangled web we weave catches naught but sorrow 

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  • Cly
    December 22, 2007

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    hmmm. i would have pegged you as more of a freestyle poet instead of dirty pretty-ish. whatever, it still works. beautiful poem.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    December 6, 2007

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    Welcome To AllPoetry

    Oh this is so true! Very effective presentation. Great job! Keep on writing. AP is pleased to have you here and we all hope that you enjoy the site. If you have any questions, just ask! The Greeter team is here to assist you.

    JeannieD


  • LucyLightning
    November 27, 2007
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    itttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttts kelly! =DDD