my avatar isn't in third person
look the rainbow is blocked partially
by my unravelled scarf I could stare at
unwrapped special as a present
with color optimized away from my nose-esophagus
etcetera storm of immune bugs
disarmed has me use mine
without true wash freedom
or wish but breeze reinforcement
isn't always entrance indication
but furniture moved around in molecules
marbles gamut I got out of a combining
panorama of events
morphed back to beautiful snow
with no duplicate development to turn around
from push ups for breath
privacy in lungs
and lids for asterisk of outsoaked
significant or funny
not neglecting wonderful
ditch to write by with fetching aim for foot
foundation that can be how am I going to prance the way I am please
in dress at mirror looking at what I should
the way others might and chiseled jowls don't journal
end of road for on off shoulder tortuous
endurance with exclamation mark not a string
to choke ages of gesticulation
stipulation or step
Author notes
good luck isn't a target with this
applause isn't expected nor wanted in emoticon form, neither any of those variations other than words. thank you for reading and writing
A contest entry
- Avatar by ea.
525 points, ended December 1, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I'm biased with the first three lines but then I got too busy for it almost, will edit as permitted
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sorry, can't find my way into this and would not even realize that is your avatar below except for the fact that it says anonymized.
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enjoyed the challenge for this evaluation
ea it's ok
I fancy this wasn't twirled well, but I was wanting to leave the impression of my back being turned more shyly than socially on the internet but current chemically sensitivity is a trust issue in person... or the celebration when free of that as when weather clears!
apology I didn't author it right,
also called
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highway scan offered or not as hazy
a spectrum i had to rub eyebrow as utensil for but I need to get back to sill at least, even that can tow or whet forwadness
small moment for a smell,
also called
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