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My Everlasting Light

My Lifes like the blowing wind, the quoting lovebirds,
the smell so sweet, my heart skips a beat,
can you feel me as your soul intertvines with mine,
can you see my face glow a different shine.

I feel paradise, a feeling like never before,
the feeling of true love that would always glow,
My soul renewend by the touch of your warm hands,
your words the strongest shield to my heart.

when I look up in your eyes I can see the heaven for all eternity,
I cant express how clear is its ray of hope and vicinity(clarity),
I can see me as a star, shinning brightly as your the sun my light,
my soul just longs for you more and more as your my soul mate.

I can listen to you in the silence of the night,
no matter what you are always in my souls site,
I am thanking the creator as am holding you tight,
am so lucky to have you, my love, my life & shine bright.

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  • sujit.pinto
    November 28, 2007

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    very nice and impresive

    when I look up in your eyes I can see the heaven for all eternity,
    I cant express how clear is its ray of hope and vicinity(clarity

  • sujit.pinto
    November 28, 2007
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    hey its really nice and really good shld be a winner poe